tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8061867138658788544.post2706993906217135004..comments2023-05-16T05:19:34.661-07:00Comments on Journo Johnson's Jottings: Shed in a FieldSheila Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14331663248808917511noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8061867138658788544.post-51407796020442507802012-05-07T13:47:09.438-07:002012-05-07T13:47:09.438-07:00Its good fun to play around with the poems a bit a...Its good fun to play around with the poems a bit and see if what is suggested works – as I’ve said in my latest blog, two heads are often better than one, but in the final analysis, the voice is yours and you can always put it back how you had it in the first place. <br />The whole writing thing is a massive learning curve but it can be an adventure of learning if we see it that way. I'd be interested to hear the poem again now that you’ve worked on it.gill_wyatthttp://www.heartsease.org.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8061867138658788544.post-81232192467938116362012-05-04T10:29:45.867-07:002012-05-04T10:29:45.867-07:00Oh dear, sorry you found the workshop so discourag...Oh dear, sorry you found the workshop so discouraging. It Is supposed to be helpful., constructive criticism.Sharon Larkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12667271985213842154noreply@blogger.com